Thats the stuff I was looking for and why this site was suggested to me. I gratefully take the points made and would be inclined to agree. As I said it was just the most recent one I wrote and wanted to share it. I`m in south america and sadly haven`t had opportunities to sing as I would at home.

Close friends there would offer similiar advise.

Was reading a book of mythical creatures and Cereberus the three headed dog interested me. I thought then of a song sung by three in close harmony. Then started writing from the point of the bark bark bark, something like the "And And And up the load right on me" in the weight by the Band.

Anyway the song is disjointed. Too many things i wanted to get into it. I suppose the best pizza`s have two topping at most.

Well I have the bones and will put the flesh on it, bearing these points in mind.