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GUEST,Ian M. Lyr Req: Todd's Sweet Rural Shade (21) RE: Lyr Req: Todd's Sweet Rural Shade 17 Oct 00


Hi,

I know it is not uncommon for there to be extra lines at the end of a song as a comment on what has gone before but what bothered me was the grammar. For the two lines to make sense you need to omit "they" in the penultimate line and "And" in the last line. Any thoughts, anyone?

Good Luck,

Ian M.


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