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GUEST,Emily Lyr Req: My song sofar could do with some help!! (2) Lyr Req: My song sofar could do with some help!! 12 Oct 13


Hi, I written this song so far, its based on a short song by a folk singer called Fred Wedlock, I would really appreciate some help finishing my song off if any of you have any ideas it would be appreciated, I just get the feeling that the songs not finished and could do with a chorus or another verse, so I can sing this at my local folk club.
This is my song so far;

Verse 1;
I was a Rock "N" Rolling man,
the pop scene was my game,
but now I'm past 70,
my friends forgot my name,
my manager, soon had enough,
and he the sack,
Now I`m into English Folk songs,
man, Caus like that's where it's at!

Verse 2;
With a pair of green wellies,
and a rhinestone cattle smock,
a synthesized Accordion,
with flashing lights on top,
I`ll rock around the may pole,
to pass the time away,
I'll listen to The Wurzels,
And Drink zider, most the day.

Verse 3;
I sold my Lamborghini,
caus that aint my scene,
I brought a Massy Ferguson,
that's British Cow pat green,
I sing like some old pillock,   
who`s had 12 years on the beer,
and when I start to sing,
You`ll put your fingers in your ears!


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