Hi Maeve, Sorry, I have no link for the song, only a tape of the Californian group "Out of the rain" titled "Song of the wage slave". This link tells a bit about the singer Richard Adrianowicz who once was with this group. The last verse sounds awkward, you're right. There's one sense changing typo in it: "this journey", not "his". I'm unsure about the "follow on" in line three of the last verse. "Better for to living"? I can't hear anything else though it doesn't sound like proper grammatical English. Line 2 of the first verse is also suboptimal. Wolfgang
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