I like what you compose.

If you are seeking kin...look to e e cummings


gee i like to think of dead


it means nearer because deeper
firmer since darker than little round water at one end of
the well      

it's too cool to be crooked and it's too firm
to be hard but it's sharp and it's thick and it loves,
dead says come with me he says(and why ever not)into
the round well and see the kitten and the penny and
the jackknife and the rosebug
                               and you say Sure ...


Sincerely,
Gargoyle

The original has correct format.