Bonnie, I considered the titling issue but I would also like to know what others are doing. I am drawing language directly from Shakespeare except where an abbreviation is hard to understand. I was surprised at how much of the plays is taken up with Falstaff's story. In order to make the piece meet the time requirements I need to bring this to the stage [between 2 and 2 1/2 hours, approximately] I have had to delete several characters, such as Doll [Dorothy] Tearsheet. Adding other characters or story lines would only make the task more difficult. I had originally considered opening with Henry IV's complaint about Hal's absence in Richard II. It is redundant , however,to Henry's much more pained opening about Prince Hal in Henry IV, part 1. This project is teaching me more about crafting a play than my participation as an actor in Richard III and Merchant of Venice. If others don't join in, I shall ask Joe to recraft the thread title.
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