The style is very much a call to tourists to come and visit. If that is the case, it will be judged against the huge budget videos of Thompson, Thomas Cook and co. Is that how you want it judges? Or is it perhaps a 'portfolio' film that you hope to use to get a job with such firms? I'd be interested to know why you need reviews of it.

So, judging as a video to persuade me to go visit. It contains the sort of thing I would expect, including some slight anomalies (why highlight camels as the only means of travel, then show a 4x4 in a later shot? ). The initial section could make me more inclined to go, the frenetic hand held video at the end less likely. Overall, it would probably make me a bit more likely but it would not stand out from the pile of competititors.

But as I say, if you want it reviewed from some other point of view, let us know.