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G-Force | Phrasing and rhyming (17) | RE: Phrasing and rhyming | 21 Sep 20 |
I love internal rhymes. In Spencer The Rover the Coppers sing: 'It tasted more sweeter than gold he had wasted'. I have always found that unsatisfactory, and prefer to sing: 'More sweeter it tasted than gold he had wasted'. Maybe that's the folk process (possibly in reverse). |