ok,some constructive critricism it is alright, but I have no inclination to play it, I find the two parts too similiar, here is a suggestion listen to a lot of tunes analyse chord structures , imo some of the best jigs like the Hags Purse, have different feel between the two parts. Another example of a tune with two contrasting part a is Chief O NIELLS HORNPIPE, where the second part goes to an f major chord or the galway hornpipe which has an intersting chord PROGRESSION at rhe beginning of the turn imo it is a fairly average composition, nothing that grabs me and makes me want to play it
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