Sharyn, The words are lovely, As for Jim, well he has his opinion, a song is only ever as good as the ear of the listener - and different people like different things. Sometimes I have read words and thought it didn't fit the meter, only to hear them sung with true emotion and realised it didn't matter and that they actually serve to punctuate the song, and give it depth, If you wrote the greatest song ever written, there would always be someone who didn't like it. I do - and well done! Perhaps Jim could give us one of his songs to rip apart? BTW, Love the poem too :0) Cheers, Lucy
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