Some corrections - Tabor's diction leaves a lot to be desired:

Stanza 1, line 6: Watch for a change in the WIND

Stanza 1, line 8: Long as a bullet can SPIN


Stanza 2, line 3: HOES rise and fall in a distant field

Stanza 2, line 5: Thought I heard the ANGEL of Death OVERHEAD

Stanza 2, line 6: But it's only the cropduster's PLANE

Stanza 2, line 7: HOES rise and fall like the beating of wings

Stanza 2, line 8: Lord send us freedom and rain [Gives the Tabor album its title].

--Stewie.