The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #68592   Message #1159419
Posted By: Barbara
11-Apr-04 - 05:53 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Unclaimed Pint
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Unclaimed Pint
There's at least one middle verse, not done yet, and I think this is more or less the last one.
This is a little scary. I don't often write songs, and I've never composed in public before. But suggestions are welcome, as long as I don't have to take them.

But sometimes in the pause
From one verse to the next,
We can almost hear soft laughter there once more
The echo of his voice is
Ringing in the last chord
We hear him joining from the other shore.

Blessings,
Barbara