The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #68592   Message #1163864
Posted By: Barbara
17-Apr-04 - 02:20 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Unclaimed Pint
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Unclaimed Pint
Okay, here's the current revision:

THE UNCLAIMED PINT

Eight pints around the table
Seven singers raise a glass
As we toast the days that come no more
But the single chair is vacant
And the sorrow's in our eyes
Tonight we sing for one who's gone before

CHORUS:
Raise your voices, raise your glasses
Sing your sorrows and your joys
We will sing until they throw us out the door
For the unclaimed pint is standing
at his empty place
No, he won't be singing with us anymore.

Good times we spent together
As the years passed by
And time and trials have bound us to each other;
Wings of songs we sang together
(Will) Carry him across,
Where their echoes ring forevermore.

(CHORUS)

Yet sometimes in the pause
From one verse to the next,
We can almost hear soft laughter there once more
And the echo of his voice is
Sounding in the chord --
We know he's singing on the other shore.

LAST CHORUS:
Raise your voices, raise your glasses
Sing your sorrows and your joys
We will sing until they throw us out the door
For the unclaimed pint is standing
at his empty place
No, he won't be singing with us anymore.(either substitute the following line, or add it -- same tune.)
Now he's singing on the other shore.

(Barbara Millikan, 2004)

Stuffy, I had trouble with starting the line with "There". Didn't work for me. But great suggestions. I appreciate the help. Right now I'm leaving the second verse without a pickup on the line that begins "Carry ..) If you want one, use "Will". I will probably know after I have sung this for a while which way I like it best.

I should probably say that my inspiration for this was also Merritt's version of "Who Will Sing for Me?", and especially his rewrite of the last verse:
"When you're singing for your friends
Whose lives on earth are through,
They'll be gathered up above,
Where they're singing songs for you."

Blessings,
Barbara