Mudcat Café message #1198392

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Thread #67948 Message #1198392
Posted By: 42
02-Jun-04 - 07:36 AM
Thread Name: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!

BB - I don't know anything about sonnets but, from reading most of yours these lines don't seem to scan for some reason. Am I crazy?

"Of how much I want to give kiss to skin?
What should I do, to give heart hope to win"