" I don't know anything about sonnets but, from reading most of yours these lines don't seem to scan for some reason."

Perhaps- it depends on the person scanning: there can be different accents depending on the person scanning... But I try to vary the structure to what I thing sounds right. I do not insist that all feet be iambic,


"Am I crazy?"

This is a topic that might require its own thread...
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