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Thread #77963 Message #1399900
Posted By: Murray MacLeod
05-Feb-05 - 12:23 PM
Thread Name: Not-So-Good Lines in Songs
Subject: RE: Not-So-Good Lines in Songs
I have always felt uneasy about the line
"I learned about life and I found a wife"
in Phil Coulter's otherwise superb song, "The Town I Loved So Well".
IMHO he should either have devoted the best part of a verse to his good lady, or else left her out of the equation completely. A throwaway half line just seems bizarre, to me.
Better by far to have written
"I learned about life, 'midst the trouble and the strife"