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Thread #67948   Message #1544984
Posted By: beardedbruce
18-Aug-05 - 12:40 PM
Thread Name: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
You might regret that comment. The early ones are of... indifferent quality. I must plead youth and lack of the extensive study I have put in in the years since they were written. Please look at the year BEFORE making comments- but comments will be looked at.


                Sonnet 18/12/73        Appelatory                        VII


                Lovely one, who has my soul in yours to hold,
                Of whose love I only wish a fraction.
                I'd trade, for but a breath, be I so bold,
                Such as I value, beneath comparison.

                Part of my heart is gone, now and forever,
                All of my thoughts are lost, only to you,
                Remembering only you, knowing that never,
                Recalling your love, again to take joy in love new.

                My heart is lost to you, O dearest friend;
                You alone control my words and thoughts.

                Lately, I wait, alone, for dreams to end,
                Only to onward dream, knowing that naught,
                Vain thoughts, can ever result of unshared love.
                Ever hoping, against my fate decreed above.