The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #84514   Message #1560155
Posted By: Jeri
09-Sep-05 - 07:53 PM
Thread Name: Lyr ADD: Make and Break Harbour (Stan Rogers)
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Make or Break Harbour (Stan Rodgers)
Kendall, having somone say a ship is omniscient would be weird enough so I'd be distracted. I can understand why a trawler is 'long-seeing'. 'All-seeing' is in the version written by Stephen King. Old friends walking on water is equally bizarre. Old friends may go out on the sea and talk, but if you've ever taken a stroll out on the Atlantic, bring Stan back!