The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #86553 Message #1610384
Posted By: TheBigPinkLad
21-Nov-05 - 01:46 PM
Thread Name: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Subject: RE: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Story 1:
The company for which Dad worked was expanding, so they moved to a larger building in another part of London. Dad when with them, and we moved closer to his job.
Looking back I now realize that my parents must have made quite a few sacrifices to enable them to vive me such a wonderful gift.
Story 2:
All 22 squadrons of the RAF were engaged, many twice and some three timers
Our group of 11- and 12-year-olds were no exception.
Areas of destroyed or damaged houses and other buildings were being added to each night; among the early casualties were two neighborhood schools, mine being one if them.
Thus a large number of children fond themselves at loose ends, and many of us gravitated to a quite extensive nearby park each day.
When Alan and me selected team members for a pickup game of soccer, Doreen would be picked between David and Arthur
"Alright, Mum."
"and tell your ma to be up and about real quick0-like."
The alley opened out into another street, across from which was a row of bomber-out houses used my many children as a marvelously exciting playground.
Sorry I'm later," I panted;
Jean smiled. "It's alright, you're not the last."