The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #86553   Message #1610536
Posted By: TheBigPinkLad
21-Nov-05 - 05:12 PM
Thread Name: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Subject: RE: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
1. My steel-shod boots rang on the cobblestones of the courtyard of Bells [possesive or descriptive?] Farm as I ran to the open back door.

11. "Alright, you can go, but be back in time to fetch the cows for milking," she admonished.


23. "She's not too happy about me leaving for a couple of hours," he said as he came thro8guht the gate of their front yard, closing it behind him. "But I expect she'll get over it."

32. Dawdling our way through the fist and second fields we entered the third.


41. We picked and ate apples from other trees, whispering to each other lest the Vicar's haring was acute enough to hear us from a quarter of a mile away.