The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #86553 Message #1613072
Posted By: TheBigPinkLad
24-Nov-05 - 04:37 PM
Thread Name: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Subject: RE: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
SATURDAY RIDE 2
6. This performance drew my friends further [you used 'farther' for distance elsewhere] out onto the forecourt of the building, where they were joined by three more unassigned drivers.
10. "Good?!" I protested. "I thought I was great!"
11. "How about riding 'cross country [no apostrophe, hyphenate] to the Mess Hall?" suggested Ernie.