The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #86553 Message #1614212
Posted By: TheBigPinkLad
26-Nov-05 - 03:01 PM
Thread Name: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Subject: RE: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
SATURDAY RIDE 8
57. I looked around the room to ? re-acquaint myself with the layout, which I hadn't seen for nearly six months.
58. Sergeant-Major Green's office occupied a room behind that wall. To the left was a wall with several metal filing cabinets, and behind that wall was an office for the two bombardiers [correct spelling] (or "two-stripers"), who were Green's immediate subordinates.
66. I sat on the cot and pondered this for a while, [replace with period
76. "You'll take your meals with us, which will be delivered at the appropriate times; this afternoon Johnson will take you to your barracks where you will pack your gear and bring it here [delete] back here," he said. "You will arrange your kit in a military manner in your cell and, after breakfast on Monday, you will stand inspection by the Officer of the Day at 0800 hours," he concluded.