These wincers are no worse than many songs that have become hits over the years.

"People smile and tell me I'm the lucky one. We've just begun. I think I'm gonna have a son"

"I am I said to no one there, and no one heard at all not even the chair"

If you actually write out the lyrics to most pop and many folk songs they sound terrible. Sung, depending on the tune and delivery, they might sound better.