Doug R.
The INDUSTRY is a very tough nut to crack.
Most successful writers have been local, active for decades.
The most successful one I know began as a child actor about age 12 (perhaps age 5) ....it took three positive money procuring scripts (age 40+) before he was permitted to direct.
Scripts are a dime a dozen. They sit like coffe-table-stacks in the dens of bored consultants.
Just like a folk-performer....you need to "hook" the audience in the first three chords.
Sincerely,
Gargoyle