I'm planning on singing this in church this Sunday, but there are two lines where I don't know what the original text is. Here's the text as I am currently planning to sing it:
The lone, wild bird in lofty flight is still with thee, nor leaves thy sight. And I am thine! I rest in thee, Great Spirit, come, and rest in me.
Each secret thought is known to thee, my whole life's path, whate'er it be; my days, my deeds, my hopes, my fears, my deepest joys, my silent tears.
The ends of earth are in thy hand, the sea's dark deep and no man's land. And I am thine! I rest in thee, Great Spirit, come, and rest in me.
Here is the Hymnsite.com version, which I am not singing:
The lone, wild bird in lofty flight is still with you, nor leaves your sight. And I am yours! I rest in you, Great Spirit, come, rest in me, too.
The ends of earth are in your hand, the sea's dark deep and far off land. And I am yours! I rest in you, Great Spirit, come, rest in me, too.
Each secret thought is known to you, the path I walk my whole life through; my days, my deeds, my hopes, my fears, my deepest joys, my silent tears.
I haven't looked in The Faith We Sing to see what Marty Haugen's new verses are, but I doubt I'll want to use them. The problem is that for the stanza I intend to sing second, my only source is the Hymnsite.com version, which is "you" where I intend to sing "thee"; so the first two lines have to be altered. My provisional emendation you have above; but I'd really like to know (assuming McFayden actually wrote that verseâ€"again, my only authority is Hymnsite.com) what the original was. Anybody have it?
I'm going to sing "bird", not "fowl", for the same reason I sing (in church) "silver" instead of "hoary" in "How Firm a Foundation".