The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #19395   Message #202629
Posted By: GUEST,Jim Dixon
28-Mar-00 - 11:14 AM
Thread Name: MORE WORST LINES
Subject: RE: BS: MORE WORST LINES
Caitrin, I think leeneia was complaining about "like you and like I", because nobody really talks like that, not even in dialect. Wouldn't you say "like you and me"? Obviously, it was only written that way to fit the meter and rhyme, which is why it is bad writing.

Which makes me think-- let's let the folk process go to work here. Does anybody know a way to IMPROVE that line?