The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #104148   Message #2128862
Posted By: retrancer
18-Aug-07 - 08:10 PM
Thread Name: Review: Bottle in the Car
Subject: Lyr Add: Bottle in the Car
Okies, I worked on this for like six months so pls let me know what the catters think of this country-western type tune....

kinda CFG

The road outside leads right up to this bar
It's why I'm standing right here where you are
I've seen a million miles
Of concrete, gravel and tar;
And babe, I've got a bottle in th car.

Babe I got a bottle in the car
the motel where I'm at it ain't that far
tomorrow we'll both have just one more scar
and babe i got a bottle in the car

I'll tell you you're pretty, and you'll lie to me
Then we'll lie together; in our own agonies
and the sun will rise harshly, and we'll both pretend
that out on the highway, we'll meet again.

Babe I got a bottle in the car
It'll numb me up just enough, to handle one more scar
I don't know and you don't care, who the hell we are
Babe I got a bottle in the car.

Yah babe I got a bottle in the car.