The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #114595 Message #2450679
Posted By: Nigel Parsons
26-Sep-08 - 06:54 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: When The Rolls Are Passed Up Yonder
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: When The Rolls Are Passed Up Yonder
Guest (Bugsy) WHEN THE ROLLS ARE PASSED UP YONDER.....Make mine Ham & Cheese.
Should be: WHEN THE ROLLS ARE PASSED UP YONDER, Please make mine Ham & Cheese. a. it is more polite b. it retains the scansion