Honestly WAV I don't think anyone gives a hoot what part of Australia you come from, or why.

Many of us would enjoy reading your poetry if you edited it and revised it and removed the suspect ideas. We might even make suggestions as to how it could be improved (steady now everyone before you suggest ways).

I hope you get a job. I hope you earn a lot.

Your employer might require you to learn new skills....

Please talk to a good singer and ask his/her advice.

Please send you poetry to a publisher other than a vanity publisher.

Please stand for Parliament.

Please join a morris team

Please don't buy any more commas from the comma shop


Au revoir

Stu