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Thread #113211   Message #2477364
Posted By: WalkaboutsVerse
27-Oct-08 - 02:04 PM
Thread Name: The Weekly Walkabout (part 2.)
Subject: RE: The Weekly Walkabout (part 2.)
"Strangely in that 'poem' WAV I think one of your spare punctuation marks would have helped.'...bees, and folks on Southport rides' usually you have a few too many for intelligibility" (Stu)...no, I'm happy with that bit of poetic licence, thanks Stu - the bees, at that bit of Southport, were flying about on "rides" of sorts.

And IB - from where I was standing on that clear day, the Lakelands were indeed seen behind Blackpool Tower.

P.S: speaking of Neptune, Venus, etc. - I got 4 stars, from someone, for that particular piece, on a rival forum!