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Thread #113211   Message #2493000
Posted By: Will Fly
13-Nov-08 - 02:21 PM
Thread Name: The Weekly Walkabout (part 2.)
Subject: RE: The Weekly Walkabout (part 2.)
Will Fly - ever heard of "near rhyme"? And as for your "see" instead of my "sense" - it's common sense...there's also tastes, sounds, etc.

Near rhyme, eh? How near - about 13,000 miles perhaps? You just don't get it, do you, ignorant twat that you are. As for "sense", in the context of what you have written, you're writing about England "playing the host". It's just a stupid juxtaposition, which you can't sense because you have no verse sense. See?

Your "verse" is just non-verse - so much worse than verse. You haven't the faintest idea how to construct even the simplest of poems, whether free verse or conventional. You seem to write the first Good-phrase that comes from your Good-mouth and think it's a Good-poem, and I think you should give it a Good-rest FROM NOW ON.