Hi, Noreen - go ahead and post your corrections here. probably better to post just the stanzas you're correcting, unless you're making corrections to all the stanzas. I'm interested in seeing what you come up with. Milner's book says the source of the song was Fr. Charles Coen, so it's a man of the cloth you're contradicting...
And I'll have you all know that my pizza is getting cold and my beer is getting warm while I'm trying to sort all this out.
-Joe Offer, dedicated working stiff-