Does it need guidance, Dan?   It sounds pretty darn good just as it is to me.

'The Blue Goose Saloon' sounds kinda fun, I have this vision of gals in big petticoats with even bigger smiles, turning to welcome all the men that walk through the doors, tired after a hard day up on the Blue Mountain...And those Mormon Gals, with the Cowboy riding home under that moon...

I have a whole Cowboy film going through my head now...   :0)

"Blue Mountain, you won my heart to keep..."