Come on, guys! It actually sounds quite a bit like some of the poetic stuff Sarah Palin has come up with in moments of great inspiration, and she's a celebrity. You may be missing the point entirely. If so, think of the embarrassment you will suffer (during the upcoming Palin 8-year presidency) when this new style of free ranging poetry gains wide acceptance and becomes the norm.
Now...umm...FWBR?
Fucked with brown rats? Flying while bouncing radically? Feline weight balancing ratios?