I attempted a variety of forms in my 230 poems, and that one, Spaw, was meant to be near-rhyme; however, on the above-linked myspace blog, I've just changed it to "bus journeys," thanks. Now, if I'd thought it was "absolutely ...." (Ps and Qs, again, Spaw), I would not have left it in; but, on the other hand, I wouldn't say it's one of my better pieces.