The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #126045 Message #2799838
Posted By: Joe Offer
31-Dec-09 - 02:43 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: Smokers Are Scum, a gentle song
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Smokers Are Scum, a gentle song
Hey, I gotta say that Carol is a very good singer and writes some wonderful songs. I just think this one doesn't quite hit the mark. I think humor works better if it's gentler and not so angry.