Any song that requires this level of explanation has serious problems.

Carol, at least consider that your song doesn't communicate what you want it to beyond a circle of San Franciscan denizens.

And, yes, there are a few defensive smokers here that still act like jerks but most of the comments seem to me to be raising serious questions about the song.

And my apologies to your friend who I mistook for a troll above. He might also consider apologizing to me in turn, or not, for telling me to "Fuck off!" in a totally unrelated thread.

Charley Noble