That was me by the way, last night at the in-laws, avoiding Gavin and Stacey having just watched the final Dr Who instalment which was quite the worst thing I've seen in years. Anyway, a little drunk at the time but reading back through it I don't think it's so very bad at all really. In fact, I might just give it to Rapunzel later to see if she might come up with a tune...

That second line should be radiated.