Again, no technical advice to offer, but definitely getting there with making the voice more present, especially with that last tweak. Aside from whatever the ins and outs of recording may be, on Lazy Afternoon, as you get further into the song, your vocals become more present and evokative. Perhaps as you got further into the song, you became less self-conscious about your voice, and so it became more expressive and warm?

And thank you Dan, for sharing all of this with us. What a talent you have!

Janie