Hi olddude,

I've listened to the song, but I'm not sure if I was listening to the original version (i.e. pre-tweaking) or the later 'tweaked' version.
What I heard sounded a little 'bassy', particularly on the guitar, with the vocals slightly too low - only slightly, mind you, and not annoyingly so.
There's a bit of confusion with the site itself. I was taking the word 'original' to mean the original version of the recording (i.e. pre-tweak)but I think it actually refers to a song you've written, rather than a traditional one or one someone else wrote?
Anyway, quite apart from all that, it's a wonderful song, and you have a very good voice.
I'll take a listen to some of your other songs when time allows.