Judging by the rhyme scheme, WAV, you want us to pronounce 'uni' as 'youNEE'. Hmmmmmm......

Have you considered adopting a less rumpty-pumpty scansion ? A more expansive phrasing and metre might allow more room for your ideas to breathe, which should be useful as clearly you want your verse to be (at least some of the time) a vehicle for social messages.