Nope, that one doesn't do it for me either. Point four of the legendary Spaw Analysis refers...
Walkaboutsverse;
'--Your "poetry" sucks.
--It has been posted repeatedly before.
--It is full of bigoted and racist statements.
--That which isn't racist is often incredibly juvenile.
--It is obvious to most that you have limited knowledge of the world, especially considering your supposed travels. '