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Thread #120107   Message #2828269
Posted By: catspaw49
02-Feb-10 - 12:58 PM
Thread Name: BS: WalkaboutsVerse Anew
Subject: RE: BS: WalkaboutsVerse Anew
No, no, no, WavyFWBR...........I am here for the duration.   As long as you continue to repeatedly post your gawdawful bullshit posing as poetry, I will be along to comment on your efforts. Note that what you post certainly comes under the heading of "doggerel"................

trite, cliché, or overly sentimental content
forced or imprecise rhymes
faulty meter
misordering of words to force correct meter
trivial subject
inept handling of subject

You need to also know that you have said nothing except to reenforce the statements below:

--Your "poetry" sucks.
--It has been posted repeatedly before.
--It is full of bigoted and racist statements.
--That which isn't racist is often incredibly juvenile.
--It is obvious to most that you have limited knowledge of the world, especially considering your supposed travels.

AND PLEASE.....Don't tell me you want Mudcat to host your crap. Unfortunately we already do.................


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