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Thread #127788   Message #2855199
Posted By: Joe Offer
03-Mar-10 - 02:52 PM
Thread Name: Poor grammar in lyrics
Subject: RE: Poor grammar in lyrics
Don's "All this chitter chatter makes I smile" makes me think of a well-known English folk song that uses that construction. What's the song? Is that construction (makes I do something) used with frequency in any region of England?



I think that if a grammatically-incorrect language construction appears commonly in spoken English, it's perfectly OK to use it in a lyric. But when it's not common usage and done just to match a meter or rhyme, it's WRONG, WRONG WRONG!!!! (are you hearing what I'm saying, Neil Diamond?)

-Joe-