Hi Big Ballad Singer,

    I watched both videos all the way through (I must admit I don't do that sometimes, when skimming youtube videos). I agree with katlaughing and deckman, that your voice is great. The PC fan is distracting and there's some distortion. However, Four Green Fields, particularly passed the "raise the hair on the arm test." I would suggest if you have a chance to get a friend with a good video camera to film you during a performance. It doesn't have to be in a formal setting, possibly just invite some friends somewhere to be the audience. With the friend filming, you can concentrate of presenting your songs. I'll subscribe to your youtube channel and comment further there, if you would like.

--Phil