The only printed version I can find among my own collection is in Patrick Galvin's "Irish Songs of Resistance", under the title "Terence McSwiney". It has three verses only - one is the one usually given as chorus. It doesn't have the third person last verse with the odd phrase. Galvin gives no soruces or reference.

I had thought of checking Zimmerman's "Songs of Irish Rebellion" - but I think he stops at 1900.

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