The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #137890   Message #3160367
Posted By: Ebbie
25-May-11 - 12:11 PM
Thread Name: BS: Relationship Issues. What Else Is New?
Subject: RE: BS: Relationship Issues. What Else Is New?
"She's a woman confronting her fulfillment, and it terrorizes her.".... "

Frankly, I consider that a bad sentence. To 'terrorise' implies stalking or sustained effort and it is difficult for me to think of 'fulfillment' as having physical properties.

A better sentence, imo, would be: She's a woman confronting (don't like that word there either) her fulfillment and it panics her.