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Thread #138985   Message #3185121
Posted By: MGM·Lion
10-Jul-11 - 07:39 PM
Thread Name: BS: Sloppy use of language
Subject: RE: BS: Sloppy use of language
One locution, extremely widespread and fashionable in usage over the past few years, which I find peculiarly annoying, is the would-be emphatic and reinforcing, but actually IMO entirely superfluous and counter-productively distracting, interpolation of three-word clauses beginning with "as" ~~~ best illustrated by examples:

"Living *as she does* in New York, Madonna is able to maintain her position at the heart of the popular arts."

"The English ships, being *as they were* small and manoeuverable, were able to disperse the large and clumsy galleons of the Spanish Armada."

See what I mean? In all such contexts, the meaning would remain, to my mind much improved by the omission, if these otiose clauses were simply cut.

~Michael~