The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #139431   Message #3198733
Posted By: Jack the Sailor
30-Jul-11 - 06:12 PM
Thread Name: BS: Let's write a truly bad piece of fiction
Subject: RE: BS: Let's write a truly bad piece of fiction
LH asked for truly back. But Truly had been truly great. She had bended and contorted and made him look good as he learned his wizarding ways. He wasn't a real wizard like Dildoni. No he was just a fresh faced kid with a basket and a rack of swords who depended on the Ontario medical system to clean up his messes. She barely whimpered when he put the sword into the wrong hole. The one hole, the one sword that could not be avoided. The audience had no clue about LH's fuckup until they saw the ashen body and the blood pooling on the floor. LH asked for truly back. But there was no coming back for Truly.