"so whats wrong with subjecting the evolutionary story to the same scrutiny."

Nothing - it has been subjected to scrutiny and will continue to be subjected to scrutiny! The difference between scientific theories and religious 'truths' is that the former are, in some sense, always provisional and never absolute.

And J-t-S I cannot see how you can possibly object to any of those quotes from Dawkins - they all seem perfectly reasonable to me (although I'm not sure I understand the one about 'A Universe with God' etc. - I will have to think about it).